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Sentence #174496

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JimBreen JimBreen July 12, 2010 July 12, 2010 at 9:29:12 AM UTC link Permalink

It arrived anyway, but maybe the .csv file was created before you set it to -1

blay_paul blay_paul July 12, 2010 July 12, 2010 at 10:05:04 AM UTC link Permalink

In case you're wondering, it's the use of 泥酔 in 泥酔のみずき that I was dubious about.

Scott Scott July 12, 2010 July 12, 2010 at 2:31:45 PM UTC link Permalink

Doing a google search I can find:

泥酔の女の子
泥酔のパメラ・アンダーソン
泥酔の夫の大失態
生徒と飲酒して泥酔の中学教諭を退職
泥酔の松浦が後輩に嫉妬

A native speaker's opinion would of course be more conclusive.

qahwa qahwa July 14, 2010 July 14, 2010 at 4:45:02 PM UTC link Permalink

何が問題ですか?

blay_paul blay_paul July 14, 2010 July 14, 2010 at 4:56:33 PM UTC link Permalink

Tatoeba の例文の一部が WWWJDIC という辞書に使われています。私はどの例文がそうか決めるんです。Scottさんは確かに日本語が上手ですけど、日本語が母語というわけではないし、例文の一部がちょっと怪しいと思ったから WWWJDIC に採用しない方にしました。

qahwaさんがこの例文が自然な日本語だと思ったら、問題なく WWWJDIC に再利用ことが出来ます。

実は再びよくみると日本文がいいけど、英訳がちょっとずれている気がします。

qahwa qahwa July 14, 2010 July 14, 2010 at 5:04:02 PM UTC link Permalink

この日本文は自然ですよ。「歩いていて」の方がいい気はしますが。

blay_paul blay_paul July 14, 2010 July 14, 2010 at 5:05:02 PM UTC link Permalink

ありがとう。

「歩いていて」にするかどうかはscottさんに任せます。

Scott Scott July 14, 2010 July 14, 2010 at 6:46:20 PM UTC link Permalink

変更しました。ポールの言ったとおり、日本語は母国語ではなくて、Qahwaさんのアドバイスもいいと思います。

blay_paul blay_paul July 14, 2010 July 14, 2010 at 7:18:56 PM UTC link Permalink

Done.

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湖のほとりを歩く。

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ゆうべ、泥酔のみずき‘は湖のほとりを歩いて、湖の中に落ちてしまった。

edited by Scott, July 9, 2010

ゆうべ、泥酔のみずきは湖のほとりを歩いて、湖の中に落ちてしまった。

edited by Scott, July 9, 2010

ゆうべ、泥酔のみずきは湖のほとりを歩いて、水の中に落ちてしまった。

edited by Scott, July 9, 2010

ゆうべ、泥酔のみずきは湖のほとりを歩いていて、水の中に落ちてしまった。

edited by Scott, July 14, 2010