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 arihato arihato December 25, 2010 December 25, 2010 at 4:06:59 AM UTC link Permalink

日本語の文章としては基本的に問題が無いと思います。

・人によっては「植わっている」が方言のように感じるかもしれません。
(「植えられた」「植えてある」「生えている」に言い換える事ができます。)

・「リンゴの木」がある「リンゴ園」という表現になっているため、「リンゴ」
がやや冗長に感じられます。「果樹園」でいいのではないでしょうか。

qahwa qahwa December 25, 2010 December 25, 2010 at 5:16:11 AM UTC link Permalink

参考までに、私にとっては「植わっている」はごく普通の表現で、方言には感じません。

arihato arihato December 25, 2010 December 25, 2010 at 12:41:17 PM UTC link Permalink

おそらく、

植ゑる(/uweru/)→植ゑる(/ueru/)→植える(/ueru/)

という発音と仮名遣いの変化に伴って

植ゑる(/uweru/)→植わる(/uwaru/)

という

ARU(五段動詞)－ERU(下一段動詞)
他動詞－自動詞

の関係が時代が進むと供に認識しずらくなっているのだと思います。

 Scott Scott December 26, 2010 December 26, 2010 at 4:43:01 AM UTC link Permalink

リンゴ園を果樹園に変えました。

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➜ #38420Finally the children saw a little orchard in the middle of the mountain with apple trees growing inside it.

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とうとう彼らは野原の真中に、りんごの木が植わっている小さな丘を見つけました。

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とうとう子供たちは山の真中に、りんごの木が植わっている小さなリンゴ園を見つけました。

edited by Scott, December 14, 2010
とうとう子供たちは山の真中に、りんごの木が植わっている小さな果樹園を見つけました。

edited by Scott, December 26, 2010