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Sentence #322574

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Fingerhut Fingerhut June 21, 2011 June 21, 2011 at 9:51:57 PM UTC link Permalink

Isn't the 'if' necessary here?

Quazel Quazel June 21, 2011 June 21, 2011 at 9:54:22 PM UTC link Permalink

And it doesn't fit at all with the japanese sentence. You can maybe adopt the english one and correct it.

Fingerhut Fingerhut June 21, 2011 June 21, 2011 at 10:01:16 PM UTC link Permalink

I tried to change it. Still needs native check, though.

sacredceltic sacredceltic June 21, 2011 June 21, 2011 at 10:03:36 PM UTC link Permalink

I think "should a war break out" would be better

Fingerhut Fingerhut June 21, 2011 June 21, 2011 at 10:18:33 PM UTC link Permalink

Thank you for your suggestions. I'll just wait a little longer for natives to throw in suggestions as well. :-)

sacredceltic sacredceltic June 22, 2011 June 22, 2011 at 5:09:49 PM UTC link Permalink

"What would become of us, should a war break out?" is also possible...and I think that was what was initially intended except words were displaced...

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What will become of us a war should break out?

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What would become of us, if war should break out?

edited by Fingerhut, June 21, 2011

What would become of us if war should break out?

edited by Fingerhut, June 22, 2011