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Sentence #323401

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orcrist orcrist August 27, 2013 August 27, 2013 at 4:29:07 AM UTC link Permalink

> Because the school has a holiday tomorrow, I'm planning to go out and play.

This seems like one reasonable fix. It's fairly consistent with the Japanese, I think.

orcrist orcrist August 27, 2013 August 27, 2013 at 6:11:24 AM UTC link Permalink

I can revert it, but then the English will be decidedly incorrect, grammar-wise...

orcrist orcrist August 27, 2013 August 27, 2013 at 6:13:19 AM UTC link Permalink

There are two grammar issues.

1. "the school is a holiday tomorrow" is not proper English. We could say "has a holiday" or "is on holiday".
2. "it is scheduled to make an excursion" is not proper English. The subject is wrong. I'm assuming the subject is "I". But that is ambiguous.

orcrist orcrist August 27, 2013 August 27, 2013 at 6:43:04 AM UTC link Permalink

Ah, the French is also subject-less, I believe. But my French is rusty. In that case, your example looks very suitable. That is, I'll post this for now.

> Because tomorrow is a holiday from school, we plan to go on an excursion.

Dejo Dejo August 27, 2013 August 27, 2013 at 7:03:21 AM UTC link Permalink

I adopted the French sentence and corrected it. It's now very close to the English sentence.

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Because the school is a holiday tomorrow it is scheduled to make an excursion.

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Because the school has a holiday tomorrow, I'm planning to go out and play.

edited by orcrist, August 27, 2013

Because tomorrow is a holiday from school, we plan to go on an excursion.

edited by orcrist, August 27, 2013