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Sentence #395301

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saeb saeb May 29, 2010 May 29, 2010 at 12:32:31 AM UTC link Permalink

I think هو here makes the sentence sound unnatural. How about changing it to just .لم يستطِع أن يسيطر على غضبه

saeb saeb June 2, 2010 June 2, 2010 at 10:51:15 PM UTC link Permalink

@moderator(s), can I get an edit for this sentence and this: http://tatoeba.org/eng/sentences/show/332224

or do we have to wait for 2 weeks...?

fucongcong fucongcong June 2, 2010 June 2, 2010 at 10:53:56 PM UTC link Permalink

two weeks, KabuKiGurl is maybe absent for some time :)

blay_paul blay_paul June 2, 2010 June 2, 2010 at 10:54:08 PM UTC link Permalink

I don't know about two weeks, but I think we should give KabukiGurl a bit longer to respond.

KabukiGurl KabukiGurl June 8, 2010 June 8, 2010 at 10:27:08 PM UTC link Permalink

sorry for letting u wait.
but, I still think the sentence is so correct!!!
anyway, i let the sentence go!

saeb saeb June 8, 2010 June 8, 2010 at 10:38:58 PM UTC link Permalink

it's repetitive 'هو' is already implied in 'يستطِع'...why have it explicitly?

KabukiGurl KabukiGurl June 8, 2010 June 8, 2010 at 10:46:04 PM UTC link Permalink

that sort of repetition is not wrong!
أحب اليابان
أنا أحب اليابان
يحب اليابان
هو يحب اليابان

all are correct ..

saeb saeb June 8, 2010 June 8, 2010 at 11:08:09 PM UTC link Permalink

it's not the same :P
for some reason it sounds natural in:
أنا أحب اليابان

but not here :P....maybe it's just me :P
(and I never said it's wrong :P...just that it sounded very unnatural to me )

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #101806彼は怒りを抑制することができなかった。.

هو لم يستطِع أن يسيطر على غضبه

added by KabukiGurl, May 28, 2010

لم يستطِع أن يسيطر على غضبه.

edited by saeb, June 8, 2010

#4925688

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