comma splice?
suggest: "at the beach. It will include: ..."
Thanks
I personally wouldn't use a colon in this case.
It will include swimming, gathering ....
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #2573733
added by Joseph, August 31, 2015
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edited by Joseph, August 31, 2015
edited by Joseph, September 1, 2015