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Sentence #77499

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tommy_san tommy_san July 6, 2014, edited July 6, 2014 July 6, 2014 at 9:41:12 PM UTC, edited July 6, 2014 at 9:41:59 PM UTC link Permalink

明らかな間違いを修正して、まだ十分に良い文ではない場合は、再び手放すという手もあります。
所有するのは、本当に気に入った(極論すれば自分の口から実際に出そうな)文だけにしておきましょう。どのような文を所有しているかによって、そのユーザーが判断されますので。

tommy_san tommy_san July 6, 2014 July 6, 2014 at 9:48:58 PM UTC link Permalink

この文だけ見ても「九時に来て」ってあまり意味が分からないので、英文に合わせて「出発して」などに変えるのは問題ないでしょう。
ぼくだったら「そこへ」がなんとなく気にくわないので、そこまでしたところで手放します。


(unadopt/disown/release/let go の訳語として「手放す」はあまりしっくりきていないので、もしいい言い方を思いつきましたらぜひ教えてください。)

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列車は九時に来てそこへ九時に到着する。

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列車は九時に来てそこへ十時に到着する。

edited by arnab, July 6, 2014