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Sentence #10056348

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Ooneykcall Ooneykcall May 22, 2021 May 22, 2021 at 7:29:48 PM UTC link Permalink

The beginning is a bit clumsy: when + gerund is pleonastic since gerund alone means much the same thing. How about rewriting it like: "Writing a sentence, you usually start with..." The grammatical subject is changed but the meaning stays.

DJ_Saidez DJ_Saidez May 22, 2021 May 22, 2021 at 7:30:45 PM UTC link Permalink

I wanted to translate "Cuando se escribe" (when it's written) but if that still represents it then thanks

Ooneykcall Ooneykcall May 22, 2021 May 22, 2021 at 7:39:05 PM UTC link Permalink

This is a dangling participle now since its implied subject (writing a sentence = when you write a sentence...) doesn't match the subject of the main clause, i.e. the word it's supposed to modify is not present. This may be common enough to warrant staying but it needs some tag then.

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #1399635Cuando se escribe una frase, normalmente se suele empezar con mayúscula y finalizar con un punto (.), un signo de exclamación (!) o un signo de interrogación (?)..

When writing a sentence, it normally starts with an upper-case letter and ends in a period (.), an exclamation mark (!) or an interrogation mark (?).

added by DJ_Saidez, May 22, 2021

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Writing a sentence, it normally starts with an upper-case letter and ends in a period (.), an exclamation mark (!) or an interrogation mark (?).

edited by DJ_Saidez, May 22, 2021

When you write a sentence, it normally starts with an upper-case letter and ends in a period (.), an exclamation mark (!) or an interrogation mark (?).

edited by DJ_Saidez, May 22, 2021