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Sentence #10459735

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 KK_kaku_ KK_kaku_ October 25, 2021 October 25, 2021 at 1:32:57 AM UTC link Permalink

"御兄弟" is a polite way of "siblings" and not used to refer to the speaker's relatives, so I suggest changing "my" to "his" or "her."

JimBreen JimBreen October 25, 2021 October 25, 2021 at 1:38:11 AM UTC link Permalink

Good point. Of course, I shouldn't have made it "my siblings". Thanks.
BTW, how do you feel about the 私は and 私の? I feel they are not needed, but maybe they're OK here.

KK_kaku_ KK_kaku_ October 25, 2021, edited October 25, 2021 October 25, 2021 at 1:49:19 AM UTC, edited October 25, 2021 at 1:53:56 AM UTC link Permalink

"御兄弟を説得して、私の案をやっと受け入れてもらった。" would be better.
"受け入れさせた(forced to accept)" is not polite and is unnatural with "御兄弟."

JimBreen JimBreen October 25, 2021 October 25, 2021 at 4:40:32 AM UTC link Permalink

Thanks. I have added that.

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #10459734私はやっと御兄弟を説得して私の案を受け入れさせた。.

I finally managed to persuade my siblings to accept my plan.

added by JimBreen, October 24, 2021
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➜ #10459734私はやっと御兄弟を説得して私の案を受け入れさせた。

linked by JimBreen, October 24, 2021
I finally managed to persuade her siblings to accept my plan.

edited by JimBreen, October 25, 2021
➜ #10459910御兄弟を説得して、私の案をやっと受け入れてもらった。

linked by JimBreen, October 25, 2021
➜ #10460588Lopultakin onnistuin suostuttelemaan hänen sisaruksensa hyväksymään suunnitelmani.

linked by Johannes_S, October 25, 2021