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autuno autuno September 26, 2010 September 26, 2010 at 11:31:57 AM UTC link Permalink

Ne estas kongrueco inter la angla kaj la franca tradukoj. Ŝajnas, ke la angla versio estas pli realista. There is no cohesion between the French ang the English translations. It seems that the Englis version is more likely.
I change for the French version: prendre ---> porter.

sacredceltic sacredceltic September 26, 2010 September 26, 2010 at 11:46:24 AM UTC link Permalink

there is still a little discrepancy between French and English: French (and Esperanto) imply that the carrier will be "asked" when the English implies that he will be made to do it, but not specifically "asked".
The French corresponding to the English would rather be "Je vais lui faire porter...".
Does Japanese indicate any formal request to the carrier ?

contour contour September 26, 2010 September 26, 2010 at 11:51:22 AM UTC link Permalink

I think the Japanese is fairly close to the English.

sacredceltic sacredceltic September 26, 2010 September 26, 2010 at 11:54:14 AM UTC link Permalink

OK, then I will adapt the French to make it closer to the English. Autuno, can you please then adapt Esperanto and Vietnamese accordingly?
Thank you.

autuno autuno September 26, 2010 September 26, 2010 at 1:11:49 PM UTC link Permalink

Dankon por viaj komentoj. Mi jam tradukis (esperanten kaj vjetnamen) lau la angla versio.
Thanhk you for the comments. I have already translated (in Esperanto and in Vietnamese) according to the English translation.

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Je vais lui demander de prendre mes affaires à  l'étage.

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Je vais lui demander de porter ma valise à l'étage.

edited by autuno, September 26, 2010

Je vais lui demander de porter ma valise à l'étage.

edited by autuno, September 26, 2010

Je vais lui faire porter ma valise à l'étage.

edited by sacredceltic, September 26, 2010