I think هو here makes the sentence sound unnatural. How about changing it to just .لم يستطِع أن يسيطر على غضبه
@moderator(s), can I get an edit for this sentence and this: http://tatoeba.org/eng/sentences/show/332224
or do we have to wait for 2 weeks...?
two weeks, KabuKiGurl is maybe absent for some time :)
I don't know about two weeks, but I think we should give KabukiGurl a bit longer to respond.
sorry for letting u wait.
but, I still think the sentence is so correct!!!
anyway, i let the sentence go!
it's repetitive 'هو' is already implied in 'يستطِع'...why have it explicitly?
that sort of repetition is not wrong!
أحب اليابان
أنا أحب اليابان
يحب اليابان
هو يحب اليابان
all are correct ..
it's not the same :P
for some reason it sounds natural in:
أنا أحب اليابان
but not here :P....maybe it's just me :P
(and I never said it's wrong :P...just that it sounded very unnatural to me )
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #101806
added by KabukiGurl, May 28, 2010
linked by KabukiGurl, May 28, 2010
edited by saeb, June 8, 2010
linked by odexed, October 14, 2015
linked by Horus, February 21, 2016