en français, on privilégie généralement la concordance des temps, contrairement à l'allemand.
Donc soit « j'ai ouvert/j'ouvris...j'ai vu/ je vis », soit « qui se tiennent »...
corrigé.
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #1342826
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