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Sentence #4408732

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 carlosalberto carlosalberto July 26, 2015, edited July 26, 2015 July 26, 2015 at 2:15:05 PM UTC, edited July 26, 2015 at 2:55:37 PM UTC link Permalink

Mistero de miljaroj (hajko)

Kolosaj tomboj
Egiptaj piramidoj
Tempodefio

Karlo

Ueltatoeba2014 Ueltatoeba2014 July 26, 2015, edited July 27, 2015 July 26, 2015 at 2:30:53 PM UTC, edited July 27, 2015 at 12:26:58 AM UTC link Permalink

Estimata carlosalberto, oni normale senigu hakojn je signoj ( kiel komo, punkto k.a. ) male tio iĝas simpla prozaĵo. Hajko estu poezio en miniaturo ( iom do gravu la vortaranĝo, la sentoinstigo, la ... (:-)

Aparte, kaj nur kiel ekzemplo, jen tio laŭ mia penso:

Kolosaj tomboj
Piramida Egipto
Tempodefio

Ueltatoeba2014 Ueltatoeba2014 July 26, 2015 July 26, 2015 at 2:35:26 PM UTC link Permalink

Senkuntekste, unualege venis al mi la sekva kompreno de la frazo: Kolosaj tomboj kaj egiptaj piramidoj defias tempon. Tamen kadre de sia kunteksto tio ja estas perfekte !

Alie, oni povus diri: Kvazaŭ kolosaj tomboj, egiptaj piramidoj defias la tempon.

carlosalberto carlosalberto July 26, 2015, edited July 26, 2015 July 26, 2015 at 3:13:45 PM UTC, edited July 26, 2015 at 6:20:48 PM UTC link Permalink

Multan dankon, Ueltatoeba2014!

Mi estis uzanta signojn (kiel komo, punkto k.a.) precipe por tio, ke la frazoj povu esti publikigitaj ĉe Tatoeba.

Sed mi nun komprenas, ke mi ne rajtas nomi tiajn prozaĵojn "hajkoj".

Mi klopodos lerni vian oportunan lecionon.

Ueltatoeba2014 Ueltatoeba2014 July 27, 2015 July 27, 2015 at 12:29:34 AM UTC link Permalink

Ho jes, vere, mi eĉ forgesis pri tio. De kelka tempo mi ne vens ĉi-tien, do eble mi devus relegi la normojn de la domo hehe.

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #4408731Tumbas colossais, as pirâmides do Egito desafiam o tempo..

Kolosaj tomboj, Egiptaj piramidoj defias tempon.

added by carlosalberto, July 26, 2015
➜ #4408731Tumbas colossais, as pirâmides do Egito desafiam o tempo.

linked by carlosalberto, July 26, 2015
➜ #4408785Devasa mezarlar, Mısır piramitleri zamana meydan okurlar .

linked by erayavci, July 26, 2015