Сезнең тәкъдим өстәлмәде, чөнки икенчесе инде бар.
I'd agree on this one. Note that changes to the Japanese should be accompanied by changes to the Index data on
http://tatoeba.org/sentence_annotations/
as well.
I knocked it out in both.
Charles, I can't speak for Paul or anyone else, but if I were you I'd just go ahead and trim surplus pronouns from the Japanese if you think it appropriate and if they don't upset the other language version (which they won't unless people want very 直訳 translations.)
