The "and yet" makes the sentence feel incomplete, I would suggest replacing "and yet" with "but" or "except."
Changed. Please check if it's better now.
That's good.
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #653131
added by Eldad, 6 Disember 2010
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