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tawa tan lawa mi -> tawa weka tan lawa mi [?]
ona li tawa weka tan lawa mi -> mi weka e ona [?]
“tawa weka” li pona tawa mi.
“mi weka e ona” ascribes way too much intentionality to the person doing the forgetting IMO. If I was talking along these lines I’d probably attribute agency to my brain to show it wasn’t intentional “lawa mi li weka e ona”.
Good point. Maybe "lawa mi li weka e ona". And in Pu, "weka" doesn't mean "forgotten", just "ignored". Maybe "weka" for "forgotten" is again my personal style.
Oh no you're right, 'weka' for ignored is a little used but very much in-the-book meaning.
That said, I think it's ok as it is right now. Thanks for the help :)
pona. :)
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #9329977
mi wile toki e ijo tawa sina, taso ona li tawa tan lawa mi. ona li kama sin, la mi toki e ona tawa sina.
touvougd deur User94234, November 19, 2020
lisensie kozen deur User94234, November 19, 2020
Hinwezen deur User94234, November 19, 2020
mi wile toki e ijo tawa sina, taso ona li tawa weka tan lawa mi. ona li kama sin, la mi toki e ona tawa sina.
bewaarkt deur User94234, November 20, 2020
mi wile toki e ijo tawa sina, taso mi weka e ona. mi lon sin e ona, la mi toki e ona tawa sina.
bewaarkt deur Tepan, May 13, 2021
mi wile toki e ijo tawa sina, taso mi awen ala sona e ona. mi kama sona e ona lon tenpo sin, la mi toki e ona tawa sina.
bewaarkt deur Tepan, May 13, 2021
