"Cirrus Clouds are" -> "Cirrus clouds are"
"Cirrus clouds are a principle cloud type." -> "Cirrus is one of the principal cloud types." or "Cirrus is one of the principal types of clouds."
Changed after more than two weeks without response. However, I just noticed that there was a mismatch between the use of the definite article in the Esperanto ("la ĉefa nubtipo") and the lack of use of the definite article in the English. I let that difference stand, at least for now, because the Esperanto sounds a little odd to me from a factual perspective: I don't think cirrus is THE principal type of cloud. Maybe the Esperanto should leave out the word "la".
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #2700169
added by Apkaloo, August 26, 2013
edited by AlanF_US, December 12, 2014