
You'll need to reverse your word order here:
«yIn» is the object of «Dub», so «yIn Dubbe'lu'.» = "Life [wasn't/isn't/won't be] improved."
You might also consider a sentence using -laH, to indicate that not only *will* life not be improved, but in fact, it can't. For example, «yIn DublaH pagh.»
You could also do something involving «qIt» and «qaq».

I changed it to use «qaq». Thanks.
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