
I think that "I still vividly remember the taste of my first kiss." sounds better. But "The taste of my first kiss remains vivid in my memory." would still be OK, I think. I just changed it to "my" because this is your first kiss.
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #1073614
added by marcelostockle, November 2, 2012
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