
"had been" -> "was"
"it's" -> "its"

Also, I don't think a native speaker would use "spin-off" in this context. Some alternatives:
"side"
"unforeseen"
"serendipitous"

Thanks!

No problem. Also, if you wanted to make it more streamlined, you could leave out the second "whether".
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