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Sentence #2473200

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 sharptoothed sharptoothed June 2, 2013 June 2, 2013 at 5:35:05 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Придя на скалы, дети
(Странные какие-то дети ;-))

shanghainese shanghainese June 2, 2013 June 2, 2013 at 5:54:46 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

судя по всему, скала одна (на скалу)

и, может, "черти"? в этом есть нечто умильное, в то время как "демоны" - страшно))

и тогда, скорее всего, "плясали".

sharptoothed sharptoothed June 2, 2013 June 2, 2013 at 6:10:00 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

"черти" (может быть, даже "чертята"?) и "плясали", безусловно, лучше. А вот сколько там было скал и критично ли единственное число - тут ничего не могу сказать, пусть автор сам решает. :-)

sharptoothed sharptoothed June 3, 2013 June 3, 2013 at 7:54:54 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Саш, если скал много, то "на скалы". Если скала одна, то куда? Верно, "на скалу".
"Прибывают" у русских обычно поезда или правительственные делегации. Т.е. "придя" было определенно лучше.

al_ex_an_der al_ex_an_der June 3, 2013 June 3, 2013 at 9:06:18 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

My idea was, that "Придя" means more or less "arriving", while I wanted to use a word meaning "Having arrived".

sharptoothed sharptoothed June 3, 2013 June 3, 2013 at 9:12:08 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

"Придя" and "прибыв" are both perfective adverbial participles and function almost identically in the given context. But "прибыв" is rather formal word so it just don't fit here stylistically.

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Придя на скалы на скале дети орали и танцевали как демоны.

added by al_ex_an_der, June 2, 2013
➜ #2473201Auf dem Felsen angekommen brüllten und tanzten die Kinder wie Dämonen.

linked by al_ex_an_der, June 2, 2013
Прибыв на скале дети орали и танцевали как демоны.

edited by al_ex_an_der, June 2, 2013
➜ #2473234Alveninte sur la roko la infanoj kriegis kaj dancis kiel demonoj.

linked by al_ex_an_der, June 2, 2013
➜ #2473238Arrivati sulla roccia i bambini gridavano e ballavano come demoni.

linked by al_ex_an_der, June 2, 2013
➜ #2473278Når de hadde ankommed på toppen av klippen, barna skreik og danset som demoner.

linked by al_ex_an_der, June 2, 2013
Прибыв на скале дети орали и плясали как демоны.

edited by al_ex_an_der, June 2, 2013
Придя на скале дети орали и плясали как демоны.

edited by al_ex_an_der, June 3, 2013
Придя на скалу дети орали и плясали как демоны.

edited by al_ex_an_der, June 3, 2013
Придя на скалу, дети орали и плясали как демоны.

edited by al_ex_an_der, June 21, 2013