Tu phrase non ha essite addite perque le sequente jam existe.
I see your point. This assumes that squirrels are humans, or at least close enough to humans. It would probably be more correct to write "the place was empty".
Or maybe I could remove the word "else." What do you think?
I would say " dark" instead of "darkness"
"darkness" is a concept, but when you turn the lights out, it's just plain "dark".
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(Unfortunately someone has cancelled the comment to which you replied) I think the word "else" can stay, when I compare your English sentence to the German. The way I understand it is this: "There was nobody there, and the closest living or breathing being was a squirrel." The squirrel being considered almost human is a good example of anthropomorphism.
This is the original sentence. The German one is only a translation, but I'm sure that it's a good one as it was done by one of our elite translators. :) I think that darkness is better than dark, because it's more literary. But otherwise I agree with your comment and this statement especially: "The squirrel being considered almost human is a good example of anthropomorphism."
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He was alone in the darkness. There was nobody else, except for a little squirrel hiding behind a tree.
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