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What's there to be changed about this sentence? (since there's a "@change" tag)
Looks fine to me.
I think the question mark is meant to show rising intonation, implying "what do you think?". But I don't mind losing it if people feel strongly about it.
I think there is a legitimate question as to whether the Japanese sentence is actually 'question like' or whether it is simply intended as a polite brush-off. On the whole I like it as it is, though.
