Please avoid word-for-word, literal, translations. No one has any use of that. What we are building here is a corpus of good, natural sounding sentences, we all can use while we are learning some language, for example. This is hard sentence for me (also learning Norwegian), and I will try to improve upon this your attempt. However, we all wait for more Norwegians here who will have to verify our attempts.

Please write on your profile page http://tatoeba.org/eng/user/profile/janni a little bit about yourself, especially about languages: what is your native language, which one you know, and which you are learning. It is best, especially in the start, to only translate to your own language here from the sentences in the language you want to learn. Even if someone would say it might be boring, and that is of a low use for a language learner - that is wrong. I've learned a lot in a short period, exactly that way. So please, try to do the same.

Vær så snill og si til meg hva du tenker om denne setningnen:
Vår industrielle sivilisasjon basert på fossilt drivstoff vil til slutt kollapse.

> Vær så snill og si til meg hva du tenker om denne setningnen:
> Vår industrielle sivilisasjon basert på fossilt drivstoff vil til slutt kollapse.

Perfekt !!
Jeg skal forandre den...