
"commenting on beloved friend" needs at least a personal pronoun. Maybe "on my beloved friend" ?
Even with that change the sentence sounds a little unusual.
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #3522568
added by neron, September 27, 2014
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edited by neron, September 27, 2014