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 Amastan Amastan August 30, 2015 August 30, 2015 at 6:49:38 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Bonjour,
Merci pour ton commentaire,

Le problème serait ici : "... qui a conduit à l'anéantissement total de la terre de leurs ancêtres..."

Ici, je crois que le lecteur comprendrait que ce ne sont pas eux-mêmes qui ont été (physiquement) anéantis (détruits), mais c'est la terre de leurs ancêtres :-p

Que penses-tu de cela ?

Amastan Amastan August 30, 2015 August 30, 2015 at 9:21:27 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Bonjour,

En relisant la phrase, je perçois qu'il y a une certaine ambiguïté, oui. Pour plus d'éclaircissement, ne serait-il pas mieux d'ajouter quelques mots (en majuscule) ?

"Les descendants des Indiens des États-Unis se souviendront toujours du génocide MENE A LEUR ENCONTRE PAR LES BLANCS et qui a conduit à leur anéantissement total de la terre de leurs ancêtres, quelles que soient les chansons que chanteront les autres sur les "gloires" de l'histoire américaine."

En plus, par le mot "anéantissement", je veux dire "destruction totale".

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Les descendants des Indiens des États-Unis se souviendront toujours du génocide qui a conduit à leur anéantissement total de la terre de leurs ancêtres, quelles que soient les chansons que chanteront les autres sur les "gloires" de l'histoire américaine.

added by Amastan, August 28, 2015
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