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 raggione raggione January 18, 2016 January 18, 2016 at 6:12:06 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Ich habe das englische Original dazugesetzt. Daran sieht man, dass es sich um sechs kleine Sätze handelt. Also wäre wohl anzuraten auch zu schreiben: Kein Problem. Versuche es wieder.

Außerdem müsste dann auch das "Fail again" eingefügt werden: Scheitere wieder.

Ich weiß nicht, ob mir "scheitern" gefällt. Es kommt mir etwas massiv vor. Aber vorläufig kann es mal ja so bleiben.

Mein Vorschlag wäre auch "No matter. Try again" mit "Egal. Versuch's wieder" wiederzugeben.

Also alles so: Immer versucht. Immer gescheitert. Egal. Versuch's wieder. Scheitere wieder. Scheitere besser.

(Das Englische ist wegen der rabiaten Kürze Becketts nicht einfach zu übersetzen. Vielleicht hat jemand einen besseren Vorschlag.)

raggione raggione January 19, 2016 January 19, 2016 at 10:16:03 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Um dem Beckett nachzueifern sollte ein Punkt nach "Egal" stehen. So: Egal. Versuch's wieder.

Ich will mich hier noch einmal für "versuch's" satt "versuche es" einsetzen, weil es der Einsilbigkeit des Autors entspricht.

Duftigen Dienstag!

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Immer versucht. Immer gescheitert. Kein Problem, versuche es wieder. Scheitere besser.

added by Esperantostern, January 18, 2016
➜ #4841896Ever tried. Ever failed. No matter. Try again. Fail again. Fail better.

linked by raggione, January 18, 2016
Immer versucht. Immer gescheitert. Egal, versuche es wieder. Scheitere wieder. Scheitere besser.

edited by Esperantostern, January 19, 2016
Immer versucht. Immer gescheitert. Egal, versuch's wieder. Scheitere wieder. Scheitere besser.

edited by Esperantostern, January 20, 2016
➜ #5493061Ĉiam provinte. Ĉiam malsukcesinte. Ne gravas, provu denove. Malsukcesu denove. Malsukcesu pli bone.

linked by GrizaLeono, October 4, 2016