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Sentence #505327

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 cueyayotl cueyayotl January 20, 2015 January 20, 2015 at 5:24:58 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

"너 내가 필요하다면, 어딘가에 있을 거야."

The sentence is in 반말 (informal speech), so 당신 doesn't work. In Korean the informal vocative case of you (너) is more natural.
필요하다, unlike in English, is an adjective, not a verb, so it cannot take an object, thus it must take the nominative case of I (내가).
Also, better than 하면, 하다면 sounds more natural because it gives the illusion that the person who is 'needing' is seeking help.
난 is OK to leave, but since the pronoun is understood, it would not be used in casual speech.
The rest of the sentence sounds good, the words DO need to be spaced out though.

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #249685If you need me, I'll be somewhere around..

당신이 날 필요하면, 난 어딘가에있을거야.

added by orzage, September 9, 2010
➜ #249685If you need me, I'll be somewhere around.

linked by orzage, September 9, 2010
➜ #904828Falls Sie mich brauchen - ich bin hier gleich um die Ecke.

linked by Sudajaengi, May 23, 2011
➜ #2880135Si me necesitas, estaré en alguna parte.

linked by cueyayotl, November 26, 2013