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Sentence #538669

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 blay_paul blay_paul September 29, 2010 September 29, 2010 at 4:33:40 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

I think the use of 自分の in this sentence looks a bit odd.

vastalto vastalto October 1, 2010 October 1, 2010 at 10:59:36 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

もっとくだけた言い方が適切だ、ということですか？

blay_paul blay_paul October 1, 2010 October 1, 2010 at 11:15:02 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

> もっとくだけた言い方が適切だ、ということですか？

上手く言えないからネイティブの方を意見を求めています。

でも、たしかにもっと砕けた言い方がいいかもしれません。
たとえば、
俺は自分の履歴書など気にしない、気にしない。
（砕けすぎ！っつーか、「自分の」の部分を変えませんでした)

vastalto vastalto October 1, 2010 October 1, 2010 at 11:33:59 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

> 私は自分の履歴書など気にしません。

これは少しあらたまった言い方です。文脈にもよりますが「自分の」と言うことは必ずしも不自然ではありません。
少しだけくだけた言い方をするならば、

ぼくは履歴書なんか気にしないよ。

あたりがいいと思います。こちらに変更します。

qahwa qahwa October 1, 2010 October 1, 2010 at 11:52:25 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

「自分の」を無くしてしまうと、「人の履歴なんか気にしない」の意味にも取れて全然別の文になってしまうと思います。元の文のままでいいのではありませんか？
Tatoebaではあらたまった言い方は載せないなどという決まりは無いはずですし、だいたい元の文が特別あらたまっているとは思いません。ごく普通です。

qahwa qahwa October 1, 2010 October 1, 2010 at 12:22:15 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

「全然別の文になる」はちょっと大げさでした。「曖昧な文になる」に訂正します。

vastalto vastalto October 1, 2010 October 1, 2010 at 5:34:32 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

では、両方載せることにします。ややあらたまった言い方とややくだけた言い方です。くだけた言い方の場合、たいてい文脈で「自分の」だとわかるので省略することが多いと思います。

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #538125Mi fajfas pri mia vivprotokolo..

私は自分の履歴書など気にしません。

added by vastalto, September 29, 2010
➜ #538125Mi fajfas pri mia vivprotokolo.

linked by vastalto, September 29, 2010
➜ #538796I don't give a fig about my CV.

linked by blay_paul, September 29, 2010
➜ #541004俺は自分の履歴書など気にしない、気にしない。

linked by blay_paul, October 1, 2010
➜ #541004俺は自分の履歴書など気にしない、気にしない。

unlinked by blay_paul, October 1, 2010
➜ #541016I don't worry so much about my resume.

linked by CK, October 1, 2010
ぼくは履歴書なんか気にしないよ。

edited by vastalto, October 1, 2010