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Sentence #6216812

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maaster maaster August 30, 2017 August 30, 2017 at 8:12:54 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

@Muttersprachlerkontrolle

raggione raggione August 31, 2017 August 31, 2017 at 4:32:37 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Ich finde, dass der Satz in sich in Ordnung ist.

Persönlich würde ich der Prägnanz wegen etwas umstellen oder umformulieren.

Etwa so: Ich habe es schon so lange nicht mehr gemacht, dass ich es vergessen habe.
Wahrscheinlich passender: ..., dass ich vergessen haben, wie es geht.

Oder: Ich hab's schon total vergessen, so lange hab ich's nicht mehr gemacht.

Mit aufgehübschten Apostrophen: Ich hab’s schon total vergessen, so lange hab ich’s nicht mehr gemacht. (Nämlich den Samba tanzen)

maaster maaster August 31, 2017 August 31, 2017 at 9:11:34 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Sei es prägnant!

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #6216809Olyan régen csináltam, hogy már teljesen el is felejtettem..

Ich hab's schon vergessen, so lange habe ich es nicht gemacht.

added by maaster, August 30, 2017

Ich hab's schon total vergessen, so lange hab ich's nicht mehr gemacht.

edited by maaster, August 31, 2017