
peut-être 'tant que je suis encore jeune' serait plus heureux

"Quand" s'emploie plus rarement, certes, mais tout de même au sens de "alors que"/"tandis que" et personnellement, je trouve cette forme plus légère, plus poétique.
Je propose que vous insériez la variante.

"comment ma raison bouleversée pourrait-elle les trouver, quand je suis encore si plein de ma première émotion"
Honoré de Balzac
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