
Missing "the" and "is", missing space after October.
Health-Sports Day is the second Monday of October. That day is for sports and to foster a sound mind and body.

Hi, could you give back ownership of this sentence please. I'd like to correct it.

I've impemented changes suggested by @Rezzonance. Does it need further correction?

It's not too bad like this.
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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #1019811
added by yurusu, August 3, 2011
linked by yurusu, August 3, 2011
edited by freefighter, August 28, 2013
edited by AlanF_US, June 23, 2018