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Sounds OK to me.

I'd replace "That's" with "It's".

I examined it in terms of mistakes. Your variant, Zifre, is correct, of course, but is sysko's wrong?

Ok, what about now?

@sysko: Perfect.
@Eldad: It's not a "mistake", but I think it sounds unusual.

OK, accepted. Thanks.
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