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Sentence #1391900

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 Eldad Eldad January 25, 2012 January 25, 2012 at 9:00:51 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

מה שהעיתונאים כתבו לא מצא חן בעיני ראש העיר.

MrShoval MrShoval January 25, 2012 January 25, 2012 at 9:14:29 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

?אתה מציע להפוך את סדר המשפט
ניסיתי להצמד למבנה המקורי
לא רציתי לכתוב: ראש העיר לא אהב את מה שהם כתבו
אף כי זה הכי קרוב למקור

Eldad Eldad January 25, 2012 January 25, 2012 at 9:17:12 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

יש כמה הצעות במה שהעליתי. ראשית, תיקון של התרגום, כי מדובר על עיתונאים, לא על אחד.
שנית, זה לא נשמע עברית טובה: זה לא מצא חן בעיני... מה ש... כתב. עדיף, לטעמי, בלי "זה". אבל אולי תרצה לכתוב אחרת את המשפט. בכל אופן, תרגמת מהמשפט האנגלי, ושם מדובר על עיתונאים.

Eldad Eldad January 25, 2012 January 25, 2012 at 9:18:20 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

אני בעיקר תיקנתי מיחיד לרבים. התכוונתי גם להעיר על המשפט שמתחיל ב"זה", שנשמע לי במשלב נמוך משהו (אז זה יחייב הוספת תגית כלשהי, אם תחליט להשאיר את המשפט)

MrShoval MrShoval January 25, 2012 January 25, 2012 at 9:23:00 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #1244371The mayor didn't like what the journalists wrote..

זה לא מצא חן בעיני ראש העיר מה שהעיתונאי כתב.

added by MrShoval, January 24, 2012
➜ #1244371The mayor didn't like what the journalists wrote.

linked by MrShoval, January 24, 2012
לא מצא חן בעיני ראש העיר מה שהעיתונאים כתבו.

edited by MrShoval, January 25, 2012