
Keeping this. We don't have a lot of sentences with "humility". Can you simply fix the Japanese please? Thanks.

Yeah. Make it an imperative.

Done, but an alternative sentence pair would be nice. Maybe ...
謙虚さを身につけたら、あなたはもっといい人になるであろう。
You would be a better person if you learnt humility.

Yes, very good :D