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Sentence #2411241

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 shanghainese shanghainese April 29, 2013 April 29, 2013 at 9:23:34 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

native check needed

Eldad Eldad April 29, 2013 April 29, 2013 at 11:28:38 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

חייה > חיה
(If you intended "beast" or "animal").

Apart from that, I would change the commas into dashes:
נאמר שבן עשר הוא חיה, בן עשרים - משוגע, בן שלושים - ביש מזל, בן ארבעים - נוכל, ובן חמישים - עבריין.

 shanghainese shanghainese April 30, 2013 April 30, 2013 at 8:51:52 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

תוקן. תודה!

Eldad Eldad April 30, 2013 April 30, 2013 at 9:44:41 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

דרך אגב, תרגום יפה מאוד, ומצוין!
:-)
OK.

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #1938092Говорилось, что десятилетний это зверь, двадцатилетний - сумасшедший, тридцатилетний - неудачник, сорокалетний - жулик, а пятидесятилетний - преступник..

נאמר שבן עשר הוא חייה, בן עשרים, משוגע, בן שלושים, ביש מזל, בן ארבעים, נוכל, ובן חמישים, עבריין.

added by shanghainese, April 29, 2013
➜ #1938092Говорилось, что десятилетний это зверь, двадцатилетний - сумасшедший, тридцатилетний - неудачник, сорокалетний - жулик, а пятидесятилетний - преступник.

linked by shanghainese, April 29, 2013
נאמר שבן עשר הוא חיה, בן עשרים - משוגע, בן שלושים - ביש מזל, בן ארבעים - נוכל, ובן חמישים - עבריין.

edited by shanghainese, April 30, 2013