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Sentence #3814730

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patgfisher patgfisher February 15, 2015, edited February 15, 2015 February 15, 2015 at 11:04:49 AM UTC, edited February 15, 2015 at 11:06:37 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

I believe it needs a conjunction to join the two parts of the sentence (as with #3814825 ) or two sentences.

He takes snapshots, and therefore asks people not to pose.
He takes snapshots. He asks people not to pose.

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Current sentence is a comma splice http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comma_splice

Tickler Tickler February 15, 2015 February 15, 2015 at 12:38:16 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Oh yes, I thought I had corrected this. Thank you!

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He takes snapshots, he doesn’t ask people to pose.

added by Tickler, January 31, 2015

He takes snapshots, he doesn't ask people to pose.

edited by Tickler, February 15, 2015

He takes snapshots. He doesn't ask people to pose.

edited by Tickler, February 15, 2015