
I believe it needs a conjunction to join the two parts of the sentence (as with #3814825 ) or two sentences.
He takes snapshots, and therefore asks people not to pose.
He takes snapshots. He asks people not to pose.
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Current sentence is a comma splice http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comma_splice

Oh yes, I thought I had corrected this. Thank you!
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