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Sentence #390469

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bojnin bojnin November 30, 2010 November 30, 2010 at 10:34:05 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

"La rivière passant au travers" doesn't sound natural french; it sounds very technical.
"se nomme" sounds very didactic as well. Here we just want to give the name of something, which is very plain. "s'appeler" would be better.

One would be more likely to say, even in formal french, "la rivière qui passe à Paris s'appelle la Seine"

qdii qdii November 30, 2010 November 30, 2010 at 10:48:35 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Pour garder le verbe traverser : "la rivière qui traverse Paris".

La Seine serait peut-être un peu vexée de s'entendre appelée "rivière", cela dit :)

bojnin bojnin November 30, 2010 November 30, 2010 at 10:58:33 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

bien parlé qdii !

So I would go for "Le fleuve qui passe à Paris s'appelle la Seine"

pjer pjer November 30, 2010 November 30, 2010 at 11:04:37 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Plus précisément: "Le fleuve qui traverse Paris s'appelle La Seine". Une personne est passée à Paris, mais pour un fleuve on emploie guère "passer".

bojnin bojnin November 30, 2010 November 30, 2010 at 12:47:20 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Pjer, je valide (avec "passer" on a l'impression qu'elle n'y est plus, une fois passée !).
D'ailleurs le "passant au travers" originel est un développement bizarre de "traverser".

"Le fleuve qui traverse Paris s'appelle La Seine" <- best translation !

Aiji Aiji September 17, 2016 September 17, 2016 at 11:33:19 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

J'ai modifié comme cela avait été proposé. La rivière > Le fleuve

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #35015The river which flows through Paris is the Seine..

La rivière passant au travers de Paris se nomme la Seine.

added by Scott, May 18, 2010

La rivière qui traverse Paris se nomme la Seine.

edited by Scott, November 30, 2010

Le fleuve qui traverse Paris se nomme la Seine.

edited by Aiji, September 17, 2016

#1090538

linked by PaulP, October 5, 2020