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Sentence #579470

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 Vortarulo Vortarulo December 2, 2012 December 2, 2012 at 1:37:18 AM UTC flag Report link Permalink

La dua "la" ne devus esti en la frazo, ĝi pli bone estu aŭ sen artikolo aŭ kun la nombrovorto "unu". Mi persone preferas la duan ("unu maljuna virino").

jxan jxan December 2, 2012 December 2, 2012 at 2:24:59 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Dankon! Vi tute pravas pri la la dua "la" en la frazo - ĝi malĝustas ĉi tie.
Sed mi tamen pensas, ke la frazo pli bonas sen artikolo, ĉar "unu" en la frazo aŭ estas germanismo aŭ tre ege forte emfazas la fakton, ke nur unu persono estis en la buso - kio ĉe tiu frazo estas tro forta (kaj redundanca) emfazo.

Amike, ĵan

Vortarulo Vortarulo December 2, 2012 December 2, 2012 at 2:32:56 PM UTC flag Report link Permalink

Ah, nu, jes, mi rigardis al la nerektaj tradukoj en la ĉina kaj angla, kiuj uzas la emfazan "一位" kaj "one" anstataŭ nenion aŭ "an"; tiel tiuj lingvoj havas similan diferencon.
Sed ĝuste, vi ja tradukis el la germana versio, kie oni povas aŭ ne emfazigi voĉe la "einen".

Do, en ordo. :)

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This sentence was initially added as a translation of sentence #342044Der Bus war leer, bis auf eine ältere Dame..

La buso malplenis, escepte de la maljuna virino.

added by jxan, October 22, 2010
➜ #342044Der Bus war leer, bis auf eine ältere Dame.

linked by jxan, October 22, 2010
➜ #767580De bus was leeg, op een oude vrouw na.

linked by martinod, February 24, 2011
➜ #2046981El bus iba vacía salvo por una anciana.

linked by marcelostockle, November 29, 2012
La buso malplenis, escepte de maljuna virino.

edited by jxan, December 2, 2012
➜ #2052785Bussen var tom bortset fra en ældre kvinde.

linked by danepo, December 2, 2012